Great story. Writing quality is good, although i usualy don't like first person view 'I' writing, I have to say that it reads good in the story, and there arent any serious grammatical mistakes. As for wold background and charcter design, i think they are the best part of the story. especially the world background, whether its the decribed world map, political situation (though they feel a bit simplified) and magic and power foundations of the world.
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