Review Detail of ntw_ff in Aimless Travels In Multiverse

got boring real quick, the whole story is way to fast paste while the story moves along there is no real description of certain points. Example mc says were going to (this place) and (doing this) and then says something like but i already know how it to get past everything with precog or whatever like the premise of the story but like i said to fast and moves in to many directions at once that it gets annoying to read