Review Detail of Jenjibread in Records Of The Immortals (Completed up to Book 2)

Honestly, I'm surprised that there hasn't been like a 300 chapter story that tells the exact same thing. Warning: My rating may be slightly inflated since I am a fan of more historical-based stories that actually emphasize the history part. This isn't a review swap but genuinely some things I wanted to express after reading. Writing Quality: There are issues with grammar at some points, but I read that the author isn't a native English speaker, so I would say the actual quality is amazing. There was one chapter where a sentence wasn't capitalized and another where it said "she was panicked" I think, but honestly, none of it stood out too much to the point that I wanted to comment on it. As for the actual writing style itself, the author has a way of writing that is reminscent of actual historical texts with the sparsity but still powerful ways of conveying emotion. It reminds me of the way Chinese poems are: few words but manages to pack a super long story or message. Stability of Updates: Uhhh way better than me LOL so I very much so aspire to become as such Story Development: A bit jumpy at some points, but I think it actually reads better for this period considering the way history was recorded at intervals of years. That being said, their romance was cute but didn't resonate tooooo much with me (I actually read this for the history sorry kekekekek) Character Design: I actually really like the portrayal of the Yue girl and the contrast it holds with the court. World Background: Think I've been alluding to this enough already ^-^