You can be generic and unoriginal to the story, that's not old news, but you shouldn't write this like the readers are stupid.So many glaring plot holes. Logics are all over the place. The author was careless in writing this. It could have been one of those novels you read despite how you have read similar books of it but still enjoyed it like eggs, sometimes you like it sometimes you don't but you can always take and have no complains. This one was made with no regards to logic and reasons which was a very big let down.
The Glass Pearl
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