First, I rather like the Story and it is a worthy read, but... Sorry to say this, but for a smart protagonist, he is acting quit often pretty dumb. Plottarmor (galore)! An example would be: Insted of acting to aquire a little security and comlete at last his Core/Titan, he is always gambling his progress away. But plottarmor is there to save his day... . That the author repeats information/himself/herself a lot of times to pad the chapters, just makes the frustration with the flow of the storry bigger. Well, I still like this storry a lot more than the others with the same premise.
Bai Yuhan
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