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so this is a great concept so far but it's very inconsistent in it's story telling it's seems like your trying to make it au but then it just follows the same story as the original and the mc is just tacked on at least that's how I feel

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Dude trust me there will ve changes in each arc that add to the stakes. I will go along with the serier bad guys and what happens but my mc will change things. He has already started by training non benders. I have a plan for them