First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great. The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.
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