Review Detail of Triston_Nomach in Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

Yo man, will you ever upgrade it.. When you added Kuroko on the 1 year Team, the story started to suck.. You are writing this story with the ideas of the shoe... He is called the king, but you made him a loser.. Really ,in the show it is all about Kuroko's idea of Basketball. then Daiki boredom and lack of love and all that. Any game or career you choose is about victory and being the best and the mc, with his wishes and cannon knowledge and all the resources available always losses, I mean common man.. And you made him a lousy captain.. with his abilities he could help all the players with their styles and help improve teamwork tremendously but he is not doing anything at all.. You should really stop focusing on the Teiko Team, they are not the main character, they are the side character, you put too much emphasis on them. There is no need to go philosophical in the story, he loves to play and wants to win.. This story had great potential but it sucks. .even now it could be great, have him improve greatly and win against Teiko. .Then at the start of High school have him selected for Japan U19 and go from there.. Really focus on the mc and his progress and not on others . . And don't sent him to Seirin high but sent him to other team, maybe with other uncrowned king or one member of generation of miracles.. so that he can rely on his teammates too..