Dramatically there sometimes when the wruter refers males as she and females as he but that is very minor. Apart from that this is amazing. when i started reading it I thought it will be like any normal Overpowered MC all cliches but this story has strong plot armour,character development and great ideas. Being a system type novel the whole concept is different. Probably comes in my top 3 of the novels I have read on this platform. I love your work man keep at it, because I know it is hard to keep an Overpowered Mc with a system as interesting as you did. Amazing I used all my power stones on you man, keep at it.
Romeru
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