A perfectly nice novel idea ruined, trash plots story not making sense most of the time chapters contradicting previous chapters. MC is really stupid and brain dead and other people have this system before him. They can walk around with guns in the city amd no one says anything no secrecy at all but no one talks about it the story is messed up cant stress the word enough literally a waste of time to read this couldn’t even go over 10chapters
MaxwellKHA
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LIKEinstead of saying it's trash and trash all over you could give the author tips and advice at how to make it better
Fatty_Cream:hes right doe this story is trash, its not his fault your frontal lobe is underdeveopedimage
FacelessMask:instead of saying it's trash and trash all over you could give the author tips and advice at how to make it better
Fatty_Cream:its safe to say its been long enough, a few months now? not a single soul agreed with youimage