Review Detail of HumanTrash in Phone App: Portable Armory

Just gonna make this a vague / semi clear review *As a note I haven’t read a lot of this novel dropped at at least chap 30 brain cells couldn’t take it any more* I like the concept of this novel it’s interesting and has potential to be something pretty good but the execution is really poor there’s literally no background / building blocks at the start of the novel, it’s I’m bored so I download app boom here’s a gun go finish mission or die. There no enlightenment on how this 16 year old school kid who is poor albeit plays lots of fps games Is suddenly slapped into life threatening situations. there’s more to add to that above but can’t be bothered to finish writing that. Not mention the infinite void of plot holes that will destroy any intelligent life that read this novel and try to make some sense out of it. Ima just put chap 2 as a example coz it still pains me to think of it Example: at chapter 2 Patrick gets shot in the foot/leg and hand he tends to those wounds at chapter 3 The HOLLOW POINT “google how much fu**ing damage a HP round does to flesh“ gunshot wounds “not paper cuts” that were disinfected and bandaged have seemingly ceased to exist past chapter 4. also at chap 4 how is this guy still walking and using his hand did the wounds insta heal are they still there. Can’t be bothered to finish this review the fact that you read to this end point your Pe*is shall grow an extra 3 inches next month, if your female 1 month of good luck for you