Review Detail of NikTitanik866 in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

The grammar and missing words are killing my brain cells. Whilst the story does have potential, it is squashed by the inconsistent MC(the humanoid monster-killing dilemma+just bad decisions) and the bad worldbuilding. The whole thing feels like a bad superhero movie. The action does pull me in but that is where it stops. There is no ˇ"meat" to this novel, there is no motivation, the bear surrenders just couse the author wanted to. In conclusion, if the author fixes his grammar this could get a 3 star rating and as for the story I just don't know.