Great story, good writing quality but wish the chapters were longer. Decent world building but the character’s path of growth doesn’t entirely make sense until you get further in. He worries about his immediate survival which makes sense while also trying to build up into he desired class/build type. I like how he is strong and growing quickly without becoming too overpowered too quickly. While I do love a good overpowered story, it’s only when it’s done by a good author. Like this one. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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