EXCELLENT, I would say that so far the novel is very well built, has an exciting fantasy world that leaves the reader with a desire for more chapters to discover the story behind the world. Interesting transmigration and with mysteries surrounding it (the MC doesn't simply transmigrate to another world and the end, the author leaves open a mystery to the protagonist's family history that makes the novel more engaging and entertaining. Other side characters still need to be further developed, but I believe that the course that is taking it is great. Sometimes the fight seems a little slow, but not at a critical point… In short it’s a history of a system in another world that differs from the cliché transmigration and system. I think it would be interesting for the author to set Power Stones goals for chapters extras, because the only thing that leaves something to be desired is the number of chapters.
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