Review Detail of Demonmaster in The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but I’ve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldn’t matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall it’s an alright read not bad but not good either just in between. P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story