Review Detail of RemoteRomance in Frankenstein Rituals : Grimm's Rise Again Series Part 1

The book started out great (if a bit self-inserty) but the author absolutely broke the book at around chapter 40ish when they start jumping worlds. This is why: #1: He abandoned his shark friends #2: His lovers break up for him at complete random in a way that does nothing but force you to think that the author just didnt like them anymore and instead of improving their characters he decided to replace them. #3: After the breakup the MC turns into an edgelord with no personality. He lets his arm get ripped off for no reason and instead of fixing it with magic he lets it stay that way (which once again makes no sense and seems more like the author going “oh, i want him to have a cyber arm and thus he wont be healing it”) Oh, and the whole prisoner worshiping the new monster shtick is nonsensical and with the rest of thing character assassination you did to your own MC only a chapter or so earlier it makes people not want to continue reading.