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Review Detail of Astralek in Frankenstein Rituals : Grimm's Rise Again Series Part 1

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Another fanfiction illegally making money off of copyrighted works like Attack On Titan, Jeepers Creepers, Harry Potter etc while not even being a good fanfiction. The protagonist is a violent sociopath that beats people half dead and permanently disfigures them for the smallest slight. At one point, he went into Ollivander's wand shop knowing he'd try to scare him by appearing suddenly(a harmless prank) and punched him. He hit him so hard his jaw broke and then waited until he woke up to use his wand to painfully, permanently disfigure him so he would have a lisp the rest of his life. Also, the writing itself is bad with him skipping over many important details such as how he uses the sword of Gryffindor to destroy a horcrux without ever putting basilisk venom on it or how Goblins all had wands. It's inconsistent! The protagonist also does dumb things like how he got his left arm cut off by Jeepers Creepers and lets the thing have it. He never regrows his arm even though he can do so very easily or could have reattached the original. The Author said that it was because he wanted to replace it with something better, but thats rediculous when he could just cut off then replace the arm later while using a pain elimination potion. He also goes to some worlds such as the Adamms family universe on Titan but doesn't do what he said he would originally. An example is how he said he would study the potions of or supernatural abilities the Adamms family possesses but just leaves without doing so once Snape marries a member of the Adamms family. Another is that he went to the world of Attack on Titan right after getting the powers of the armored titan and the collossus titan but leaves right afterwards without collecting the other powers because he's a coward that is afraid of being eaten by Titans when he's in a flying castle. That doesn't include that he has spells of instant dearh like the Avada Kedavra or the fact that he has the three Hallows that would let he himself stay hidden as long as he wished plus his castle being much the same. Most importantly, the book is also clearly not edited at all but he still has locked over a hundred chapters(Over 50% of the book) behind a paywall. This is illegal as he doesn't own the copyrights to many of the worlds in his fanfiction or right to the IPs such as Harry Potter, AoT, etc. The grammar, spelling and punctuation are at the level of a 6th grader. 1/5 Stars, do not read. Especially don't pay to read the rest on his patreon when he is clearly lackidasical in his efforts when the book he's trying to make money off of(illegally!) isn't even properly edited. And don't tell me that he'a a non-english speaker to excuse this! If he can barely write or understand the English language, he shouldn't be writing a fanfiction that he's trying to make money off of. If I pay for a product, I expect a minimum amount of effort given and that is CLEARLY not present.

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Frankenstein Rituals : Grimm's Rise Again Series Part 1

DrakeGrimmhound

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DrakeGrimmhound
DrakeGrimmhoundAuthorDrakeGrimmhound

it's free to read on pat reon though...

Jakob_Timm
Jakob_TimmLv1Jakob_Timm

Free means no payment and for patreon you need to pay.

DrakeGrimmhound:it's free to read on pat reon though...
DrakeGrimmhound
DrakeGrimmhoundAuthorDrakeGrimmhound

the chapters are public, so you don't need to pay to read. literally nothing is behind a paywall

Jakob_Timm:Free means no payment and for patreon you need to pay.
Jakob_Timm
Jakob_TimmLv1Jakob_Timm

My bad, didnt know you could post like this on patreon like this. I tought patreon dont allow such posting when they are not earning money.

Jakob_Timm:Free means no payment and for patreon you need to pay.