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Review Detail of Pavan_Swarup in New Age Of Summoners

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Pavan_Swarup
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The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit: The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move. The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.

New Age Of Summoners

vinayraj

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DaoistDanpuff
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Also, the constant use of “haha” before adding “so and so laughs” is irritating

WATCHER_X
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couldn't agree more...

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Thanks for Saving me from wasting my time

Yahya_Zakarya
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if you think u were saved then u r dead wrong this all changes later this story is literally one of the best

Graphic:Thanks for Saving me from wasting my time