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Review Detail of michele_00 in Paragon of Sin

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michele_00
michele_00Lv22mthmichele_00

Book used to be so good man. But now plot moves at a snails pace and the harem is never ending. The story is heavily padded with useless bs that no one really cares about( SO MUCH FILLER). I hate about a third of the harem and hope they were never there. Character descriptions are nonexistent and everything is "she was so beautiful" or "her beauty was blinding" all bs that gives us nothing in terms of proper character descriptions. For the harem, no one but the author remembers more than like 5 of them and even then you can barely picture the ones you remember cus the author doesn't know any character description words apart from "beautiful" (used so much I doubt the world has an actual standard for beauty). Also Most of them are just complete leeches in my opinion. Mc spends a crazy amount of time and resources nurturing them and it just gets personally annoying having them basically be the whole plot. Book used to be so good man but the filler.. sad what it has become.

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Paragon of Sin

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Yarakiri
YarakiriLv12Yarakiri

So true! So much potential ruined, and it just keeps getting worse. I hope a lot from his harem dies but given the way the story is going, that will never happen. The only time I enjoy reading is the passages with Zuhei and Su Mei and the ascendant primes in general. The rest is just trash.

The_Abaddon
The_AbaddonLv1The_Abaddon

Sometimes these "beauties" react for so long, that I'm thinking about when the author will bring in the plumber, the mailman, and the locally elected officials, so he can ask their opinion as well.