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Review Detail of Roinuji in Paragon of Sin

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Roinuji
RoinujiLv1011mthRoinuji

This novel is contradictory in my head. This novel is a rollercoaster of emotions, leaving readers with conflicting thoughts. At its core, it presents a rich and realistic world, complete with charismatic characters who exhibit relatable goals and emotions. The cultivation system introduced in the story is satisfying and complex. The author's ability to create an extraordinary protagonist is commendable. The clever actions of the main character consistently surprise me, and their personal development remains consistent throughout the story. This consistency is a testament to the author's skill in crafting a compelling narrative. However, the novel takes a drastic turn when the author decides to introduce a harem element to the protagonist's journey. This sudden shift in focus, where the protagonist collects women as members of his harem, undermines the otherwise amazing novel. The inclusion of a harem comes across as unnecessary and detracts from the story's original appeal. The women in the story lose their relevance and become forgotten as their numbers increase. This approach not only diminishes the impact of these characters but also wastes valuable chapters that could have been spent on developing the main story further. The author attempts to justify the presence of the harem by striving to make these women powerful and significant to the overall narrative. However, this effort proves to be futile, as the sheer number of women in the harem makes it impossible for each character to receive meaningful development. As a result, the inclusion of the harem becomes more of a distraction than a valuable addition to the story. The zenith of the novel is experienced during the protagonist's travels with Su Mei and Bai Lin. This part of the story showcases the potential of the narrative without the harem element. Sadly, the quality of the novel plummets thereafter, failing to recover from the negative impact of the harem concept. In conclusion, this novel is a contradictory work that showcases remarkable world-building, charismatic characters, and an interesting cultivation system. However, the decision to introduce a harem severely undermines the story's integrity, reducing strong female characters to objects of desire. While the novel still offers an enjoyable read, it fails to reach its full potential due to this unnecessary and distracting element.

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FactsOnly
FactsOnlyLv15FactsOnly

I’d disagree. I do believe the focus on harem members are a bit much, but this “hedonistc lifestyle” is also apart of his character progression. He clearly used debauchery as an escape from certain things (not to spoil anything)

Konrad_69
Konrad_69Lv4Konrad_69

Heavily disagree on this. Every women out there has strong ambitions. Especially his main wife and concubine. Plus the story is reaching it’s climax. There is no time needed for unnecessary romance.

Jack_n_off
Jack_n_offLv4Jack_n_off

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Roinuji
RoinujiLv10Roinuji

It is just my opinion, but I understand that others may have a different perspective. You are free to disagree.

FactsOnly:I’d disagree. I do believe the focus on harem members are a bit much, but this “hedonistc lifestyle” is also apart of his character progression. He clearly used debauchery as an escape from certain things (not to spoil anything)
Roinuji
RoinujiLv10Roinuji

It is just my opinion, but I understand that others may have a different perspective. You are free to disagree.

Konrad_69:Heavily disagree on this. Every women out there has strong ambitions. Especially his main wife and concubine. Plus the story is reaching it’s climax. There is no time needed for unnecessary romance.
Konrad_69
Konrad_69Lv4Konrad_69

Don’t get wrong. I respect your opinion but some of your statements were truly wrong so I was quick to point it out. “Most” women in this novel are not your typical ”objects”. Unlike Pretty much very single cultivation novels, this one is quite generous when it comes to women. There is no such “Typical cold/unreachable beauty who later just becomes a fodder”

Roinuji:It is just my opinion, but I understand that others may have a different perspective. You are free to disagree.