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Review Detail of Grimkin in Paragon of Sin

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Grimkin
GrimkinLv131yrGrimkin

There are good aspects of this novel and then there are bad as well, though the bad will start to heavily tilt the balance of the scale after a few hundred chapters. The writing quality and/ or translation is the highlight of this novel, the author has taken the time to pack in information, as well as constant world building into the story in addition to the lengthy chapters. The author is also a little more creative with the cultivation system and while, it does not venture off too much from your typical system, the author is more in-depth with explanations as well as giving each minor realm its own unique, innovative touch. Each minor realm of the cultivation system has a reason to exist and slowly, but surely builds a logical foundation over time that ties into the power the cultivation system grants each character. There are also unique elements to the story that I find creative and fun, such as the various side characters that are parodies of your typical Xiaxia protagonist or the constant countdown towards the MC's doom that pushes his cultivation vs. the typical "I want power over my own fate" trope. If I had to summarize the bad, it would have to be that the novel is directionless, slow pacing and in relation to that, too much filler. The author has, without a doubt, thought out their power system. After that though, is where the novel loses a lot of readers because it gives the feeling that the author had a great idea for the power system but didn't have much in terms of story and plotting, constructing a weak and mediocre story around a solid foundation. There is too much filler and you end up reading thick, convoluted chapters that does not push the needle forward much in the grand scheme of things, spending upward of 30 to 50 chapters to stretch stuff out. There is not much progress with the MC in terms of cultivation and while the beginning of the novel makes you believe that you know what kind of character he is, he will then later mellow out and become quite generic and quite frankly, cowardly. I would argue that this novel is more about the MC building up a faction + kingdom building in all honesty, which isn't something I was expecting this novel to turn into if you were to compare the beginning of the novel to now.

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Sighingmadman
SighingmadmanLv5Sighingmadman

I kind of agree with alot of "bad" things that you mentioned, and yet while they are on the negative side, they must exist. The info dumps are never fully negative simply because if u want to skip them u can, but if they arent there and u want to know more about stuff what can you do? The slow/weak story is part of what perspective it is read from - we mostly read from the perspective of MC who is downright ignorant of pretty much everything, hes very intellegent and curious and finds answeres along the way, but in this story everything or most things happen for a reason be it choice or plans of someone put in to motion long ago. So how can story progress or be known if the mc did not make that choice yet? Also mc's weakness or cowerdice or everything els is part of he's charecter development - he's not perfect from the start hes not 10/10 - hes a product if he's experiences, and i do really hope that he will continue to change along the things he finds out/experiences. Be it negative or positive changes.

Josboyx
JosboyxLv12Josboyx

I don't think there is going to be a change as evidenced by the author last responding to comments 1yr ago.