Review Detail of Shofi96 in Paragon of Sin
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Pretty fantastic one but also disappointing,, why because you'll love this at the early stages and mid stages of the story but the latter part is disappointing. After the destruction of the tri-vision starfield, i was excited to see amazing development in the new starfield but author hasn't met that excitement. He just focuses on the side characters,, harem members,, subordinates,, ascendents,,other blessed. Then he focuses on describing the world background, cultivation system,,alchemic rank,,mystic rank,,resource rank and what not ; that is nothing but fillers to expand the chapter quantity... but that was fine,acceptable. But the latter part of those chapters the writing style of author has also changed,,,he fills the chapter with irrelevant explanation, comment about something but leaves the audience in cliffhangers and what is the most irritating thing is he abruptly changes the scenario,, like the development of MC is ongoing but after the next chapter we experience different scenario.
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ya I agree these recent 2 volumes have been a complete mess, the focus and direction and goals from the first 4 have gone out the window basically he spent nearly an entire volume to set up this new stellar region only to introduce the next 'high tier' civ at the end of the volume literally called Grand Cyclical stellar region, basically trivializing all the political intrigue and power struggles in this, now considered low tier place after wasting all that time setting it up. and ww bouncing from place to place on a whim getting into easily avoidable live threatening situations is not the same calculation man from the first 4 volumes
Plus after 800 chapters..his cultivation progress has stopped and helping others ascendent to increase their cultivation and giving them precious exilirs become some kind of young masters hiding behind the earthly saints.. and more focused on alchemy dao rather than story or other elements of the novel
Echelon_5:ya I agree these recent 2 volumes have been a complete mess, the focus and direction and goals from the first 4 have gone out the window basically he spent nearly an entire volume to set up this new stellar region only to introduce the next 'high tier' civ at the end of the volume literally called Grand Cyclical stellar region, basically trivializing all the political intrigue and power struggles in this, now considered low tier place after wasting all that time setting it up. and ww bouncing from place to place on a whim getting into easily avoidable live threatening situations is not the same calculation man from the first 4 volumes
Same. I've picked up the habit of skipping chapters in bulk because there's so much 'nothing'. I've seen word padding in novels like True Martial World, but this is on another level. At this point, I've lost all respect for the author. He doesn't put the readers in his eyes. It's unfortunately a common phenomenon with amateur writers that successfully establish a solid fanbase. I mean look at me. I'm hating on the guy, but still not dropping the novel.
