Review Detail of KevinAscending in Paragon of Sin
Review detail
Just like before, I'll be brief and to the point. (Curse 140 Word Count). To all those reading, will read, thinking of leaving a review, comment, power stone, or reply to my comments, I thank YOU for being apart of this! Let's move forward, strongly and with anticipation for the future.
Paragon of Sin
KevinAscending
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Great novel btw. It's so rare to find originality in cultivation novels these days that I thought there was only ergen left to write the good stuff, and even he kinda let me down for how three inch world went from masterpiece to borderline garbage. The only thing I don't particularly like about Paragon of Sin is the emotional swings whenever a woman is involved, they feel extremely forced, though I guess that goes for 90% of the cultivation novels where the MC is "ruthless to his enemies and kind to his friends", nevermind the fact that it makes him look like a fucking lunatic. But I'm fine with that. Really. The issue is the excessive focus on "the warmth" he shows, it's weird as hell. What's also weird, and terribly unlikely, is the fact that every woman just randomly falls in love with him and seemingly can't wait to become a cock-sleeve to be used once every decade together with other just-as-pathetic women. But I knew what I was getting into when I read the harem tag so no problem. Anyways, has it been dropped? I'd appreciate a heads up.
wryyyyy:Loving your story so far. This one is far superior to your other novel. I will support you all the way.
MC is a lucky bastard, until his heavenly karma (luck) ran out and he was supposed to die in a sect massecre. However, he inherited the power of "Inheritor of sin" which boosts up his heavenly karma (luck). Don't think lightly of those karma, you would need to suffer a bunch of calimities to boost it up.
darkergrim:Can you give me a small summary about it and a little bit of spoilers;)
wryyyyy:MC is a lucky bastard, until his heavenly karma (luck) ran out and he was supposed to die in a sect massecre. However, he inherited the power of "Inheritor of sin" which boosts up his heavenly karma (luck). Don't think lightly of those karma, you would need to suffer a bunch of calimities to boost it up.
Do you have a Patreon? I really like the novel and would support you if you have one. Also being a little selfish, it would satisfy my cravings if you had a mass release or increase the daily release of the chapters. I have left a review for this novel as I sincerely believe, it's one of the best on the site. Keep up the great work. **: Also you need to release this on Amazon or something to give you a wider audience and advertise your writing ability.
wryyyyy:MC is a lucky bastard, until his heavenly karma (luck) ran out and he was supposed to die in a sect massecre. However, he inherited the power of "Inheritor of sin" which boosts up his heavenly karma (luck). Don't think lightly of those karma, you would need to suffer a bunch of calimities to boost it up.
wryyyyy:MC is a lucky bastard, until his heavenly karma (luck) ran out and he was supposed to die in a sect massecre. However, he inherited the power of "Inheritor of sin" which boosts up his heavenly karma (luck). Don't think lightly of those karma, you would need to suffer a bunch of calimities to boost it up.
So I don’t know if you might see this but I would humbly ask to please please make a novel about the Morden day were people start to awaken super powers and the main character got a special body that allows him to cultivate and becomes the first cultivator on his planet and has incredible talent.Well I think it fits in you genre of writing so I beg of u to considerate
