Review Detail of amaturewriter in Solo Leveling: The White Death
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Oh my.....look first off, the title is stupid,,,white swan dosnt intimidate anyone.... Now for the story, like there not much plot right, but ****, this one chp might probably be one of the greatest chps I've read,,,the english, the grammar and the content it in, including the characters character?. .its gold, and me saying this is something, cause I've read author dudes other book, its nice but I thought it was stupid. The story, seems to be AU, there are more characters here, ex: like I think here there are more than 5 national level hunters...so yah...as for the MC, I dont really know who he is cause there wasnt any moments of MC mentioned, but I think there might be two of em,they might be bros,,, author man, a suggestion,,,,make only one MC, cause its better,,,but you do you. Either way, the stories actually done well, meaning its foundation is dope, so it has potential. not much so generic suggestion: Only one MC,,,,smart MC, OP MC, hide his powers and ****...add some romance, just build it,,,no shallow ****, or useless chicks,,,make em loyal an helpful. **: I know this isnt an actual review, but ****, the first chp got me..and all I can say is, if this continues....it'll be dope
Solo Leveling: The White Death
Phantominium
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Thank you for the review. Well I just want to answer a few of your questions, why did I choose to make a story that took place at the Alternate Universe? Because the Solo Leveling Universe is bland and boring imo, there are no World Buildings, no significant Character Development, Power Systems that are not well explained (Classification of Power), and I don't want only developed countries like Japan, Korea, and the US to be involved in the story. And for the Main Character, of course it is Reo.
2 things....The title, may be change it....swan, dosnt sound very powerful..........also,IDK but personally,a stories better with only one MC, I'd suggest only one, but u do u...anyway GL
Phantominium:Thank you for the review. Well I just want to answer a few of your questions, why did I choose to make a story that took place at the Alternate Universe? Because the Solo Leveling Universe is bland and boring imo, there are no World Buildings, no significant Character Development, Power Systems that are not well explained (Classification of Power), and I don't want only developed countries like Japan, Korea, and the US to be involved in the story. And for the Main Character, of course it is Reo.
I didn't choose the title based on the most intimidating and powerful name or something, but based on the main character in the story itself. There is a unique philosophy about swans, long neck, white feather and beautiful eyes, it is so elegant. Above the surface of the water, the swan is so elegant, but under the water it continues to paddle in order to continue swimming. First the swan's appearance depicts Reo himself, he is an Albino. Second, it is his personality, from the outside he looks like a gentle and generous person, but actually he is not (This will be a spoiler, so I'll end it here). Also, as I said, there is only one main Character here. But that doesn't mean that I will make other characters forgotten, I want them to also get decent and interesting character development, unlike the original work.
amaturewriter:2 things....The title, may be change it....swan, dosnt sound very powerful..........also,IDK but personally,a stories better with only one MC, I'd suggest only one, but u do u...anyway GL
I didn't choose the title based on the most intimidating and powerful name or something, but based on the main character in the story itself. There is a unique philosophy about swans, long neck, white feather and beautiful eyes, it is so elegant. Above the surface of the water, the swan is so elegant, but under the water it continues to paddle in order to continue swimming. First the swan's appearance depicts Reo himself, he is an Albino. Second, it is his personality, from the outside he looks like a gentle and generous person, but actually he is not (This will be a spoiler, so I'll end it here). Also, as I said, there is only one main Character here. But that doesn't mean that I will make other characters forgotten, I want them to also get decent and interesting character development, unlike the original work.
amaturewriter:2 things....The title, may be change it....swan, dosnt sound very powerful..........also,IDK but personally,a stories better with only one MC, I'd suggest only one, but u do u...anyway GL
Phantominium:Thank you for the review. Well I just want to answer a few of your questions, why did I choose to make a story that took place at the Alternate Universe? Because the Solo Leveling Universe is bland and boring imo, there are no World Buildings, no significant Character Development, Power Systems that are not well explained (Classification of Power), and I don't want only developed countries like Japan, Korea, and the US to be involved in the story. And for the Main Character, of course it is Reo.
Is it gonna be romance??? If so I won’t read also if there is a harem, I won’t read so pls get back to me with the answers before I read
Phantominium:Thank you for the review. Well I just want to answer a few of your questions, why did I choose to make a story that took place at the Alternate Universe? Because the Solo Leveling Universe is bland and boring imo, there are no World Buildings, no significant Character Development, Power Systems that are not well explained (Classification of Power), and I don't want only developed countries like Japan, Korea, and the US to be involved in the story. And for the Main Character, of course it is Reo.
No Harem, the goal of the story is Reo's Character Development, from a cool blooded person to a human. Ofc, there is one girl who take a part of that development and become a special person to our MC.
Adolf:Is it gonna be romance??? If so I won’t read also if there is a harem, I won’t read so pls get back to me with the answers before I read
No Harem, the goal of the story is Reo's Character Development, from a cool blooded person to a human. Ofc, there is one girl who take a part of that development and become a special person to our MC.
Adolf:Is it gonna be romance??? If so I won’t read also if there is a harem, I won’t read so pls get back to me with the answers before I read
So it’s no harem but it is romance, ok I shall give a rate but I will not read it, ty for letting me know so quickly smh
Phantominium:No Harem, the goal of the story is Reo's Character Development, from a cool blooded person to a human. Ofc, there is one girl who take a part of that development and become a special person to our MC.
Also is your other novel harem or romance??? I have it in my collection but I didn’t know it was made by you...
Phantominium:No Harem, the goal of the story is Reo's Character Development, from a cool blooded person to a human. Ofc, there is one girl who take a part of that development and become a special person to our MC.
Adolf:So it’s no harem but it is romance, ok I shall give a rate but I will not read it, ty for letting me know so quickly smh
You brought up a girl so you never know what he may do author you may change your mind Bc some readers want them to be together so why would I read if I will drop as soon as I see romance?
Phantominium:No romance, wdym?
Its not a romance, as i said before, it is and Action, Adventure fanfic, no romance, and focusing on the storyline and Character developments. And of you read you know what type of MC Reo is.
Adolf:So it’s no harem but it is romance, ok I shall give a rate but I will not read it, ty for letting me know so quickly smh
Adolf:So it’s no harem but it is romance, ok I shall give a rate but I will not read it, ty for letting me know so quickly smh
Phantominium:Its not a romance, as i said before, it is and Action, Adventure fanfic, no romance, and focusing on the storyline and Character developments. And of you read you know what type of MC Reo is.
No, as i said before, this story is about how the MC is human but not have an human emotion. Same as you, i hate Harem, and not a big fan of romance.
Adolf:You brought up a girl so you never know what he may do author you may change your mind Bc some readers want them to be together so why would I read if I will drop as soon as I see romance?
Adolf:I like solo characters, so I can’t read as the “solo” is the point of what I’m saying
He is gaining the emotions over time?? Why is he called a white swan?? Sounds gay and why not be a white dragon or tiger
Phantominium:No, as i said before, this story is about how the MC is human but not have an human emotion. Same as you, i hate Harem, and not a big fan of romance.