Review Detail of herbert in I Have A One Piece System, So Why Am I Not In One Piece?!?!

Writing Quality: Excellent (On a site where 3/4 of the fan-fics start with a run on sentence, taking me out of the story, this is pretty good.) Stability of Updates: so-so Story Development: The story has been going in a good direction so far Character Design: Good World Background: Excellent (One thing I can say is that its always good to keep a little bit of mystery. It helps bring about a sense of excitement when you find out more about the world and its characters.)