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The author has lost my respect.Don't get me wrong, the novel is AMAZING!!!Dont start anything new when you havent completed everything. What I mean is, dont start a whole NEW novel when you havent even finished the old one if you can't work on both and multitask and it feels like your screwing over your fans. He says it hasn't been dropped, it doesnt feel like it. Even if he starts uploading again, it wont be the same. IF he stops uploading on his other novel and works on this one, it wont be fair as well, but he will need to if he wants to start working on this one again, it wont be fair to the people reading his other novel. I feel like he has screwed himself, and both his novels, and his fans and readers. Which sucks becuase I think hes an amazing author and this book is fantastic. I'm not sure what feedback or critism I can give, and I dont want to be a jerk, but I feel I have to.You cant multitask working on two novels, ive seen someone do it. Its not good, they get characters names confused and characters messed up. Making BOTH novels worse.Way to much time has passed. I want This novel to keep continuing for a long time, maybe even to 1000 chapters, or least unit it FEELS like its satisfactory. I dont want the author to leave a bunch of things open-ended. I feel like whats to come is he "MAY" rush the novel to completion so he can work on just one novel, or maybe doesnt have enough ideas. We still need a lot of character development and for Screen/text time for characters.saya and her mother, One punchman characters, and the world of maya' s, Alice, Astrea, and so much more.This novel is great, though the r18 writing "scenes" arent the best and are a little bland. Bdsm, Anal, and other stuff would be a nice edition other than what feels a little plain. I came to this novel becuase of R18, but stayed because of how good it was the story and characters felt great and enjoyed the story more than I enjoyed the R18.My favorite character is Loki, and the masochist dragon.Its been 3 months since the author has uploaded a new chapter. He first said he would reread the novel, which is totally fine I get that. Then Ive seen a couple things where hes replied to people who said when is a new chapter coming, and he said soon or here shortly on a few of them. One recently and another a while back ago, im pretty sure, not certain, but if your not certain when your going to upload, dont give a date or say soon if your not sure and lie.Instead he focuses on his other novel and it feels like he doesnt care about this one anymore.

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