I'm really disappointed at this story. The start was really promising but the plot degenerated into nothing after. Not only does nothing move, there are messy elements thrown in here and there. The exciting drama of father vs suitor became trite and convoluted. I don't even think the FL has a personality by this point, just a series of flirty actions with the ML and sudden moments of 'badass-ness' which aren't well-written at all. Even worse is the ML, who is just popping up all over the place like he has no story of his own. The father just swings on a pendulum of 'I hate this slur on my reputation' and 'oh, she's so cute my kokoro doki doki'. Nobody makes any sense. Everything is a tool to show off. But the worst part is that the showing off and face-slapping is just poorly done and distasteful.
Tian Qiqi
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