not bad, the plot is interesting and comprehensive, not rushed, not slow, my only cons is the use of Genjutsu to become stronger, if it was about physical skills, I could swallow, after all, it would be like shadow boxing, but ninjutsu? na… in the end, it became an AI chip, it just doesn't have the name, it would be much better if you just had him reborn with an AI chip directly, his story wouldn't have such a big hole, but still, you can swallow it .
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