Pretty good story so far, In my opinion. Down side is that it DOES become Machine translated and not at all translated by a human. You can see this in many cases when dialog is repeated consistently, like " Bullied and Bullied ". <-- Example. Truth be told, It's not to noticeable until they talk about the power scaling and/or some cultivation techniques where the Machine translation fails horribly with those. The only other gripe I sort of have is how even the most basic chapter arcs take 4-6 chapters to get through before we move on, Conversations normally repeat themselves here and there to extend the number of " chapters " involved. In some parts, it's not bad. Adds more details to the story and world building but in some... Like casual conversation... It becomes quite the headache as it drones on and on. Otherwise, Honestly, It's pretty bearable! A great read with tons of updates. Will keep you busy and satisfied, In my opinion.
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