I like the way it was started, he is stoic and goofy with thick mind to relationships. ......but to train a captive, or someone he has decided is not worthy to work at his shop, there was no logic to that story development. He trained his sister's pet so that she could advertising for his shop, he did the same for the first girl, but this has no reason at all. ...I understand that the characters have to develop, but please make it in line with the current character development line. He is more accepting of people and accepts them when it coincidences with his business. .....otherwise great story keep at it.
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