I like the plotline of this story but it seems the storyline was a bit rushed in the beginning. Not to mention, it's a bit hard for me to relate to the MC (Main Character) she has no attitude, meaning she doesn't setting up personal barriers. What i mean by this, is she will think this but never vocalizes her thoughts or opinions. Maybe she will try to escape but gives up rather quickly, anothing thing that bugs me a bit and i know this is a "culture thing" but alot of people in America, including myself find people with freckles quite attractive. Not going to lie, i found it a bit hurtful; that she used freckles to look "Ugly". All that shouldn't matter and what should matter is that, love is love. But in all, i like where the plotline is going and wish that they prolonged and explained a bit in the beginning because i dont know about you but whatever happened to her shoes, if she was at a open mall area? I'll keep reading and maybe change my vote if things get more exciting, until then its a 3 star.
White-Headed Dream
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