Review Detail of 23dark in My Chaotic City

Hi, I'm the editor for this title :) Thanks for giving it a try! I think as we were doing this title as well, we realised that the Chaotic City Lords themselves have tower defense elements but it's also mixed with a lot of other things: VR, adventurer players, etc. Sort of reminds me of games with lots of city/army strategy since there are the 'global/raid' events as well haha

Yeah yeah of course it seems to have a good amount of elements as well like a mix and it works so so well I'm excited for the beast master trap tho there is so so many ways that trap could work / evolve in the future like would it even be a trap anymore instead becomes a actual Npc with thoughts feels etc since it was mentioned at one point that there was a ghostly guy that came out of the trap to ride the creature it would be interesting to see how you guys will play with that aspect or leave it as it is yeah I think it already got changed twice so would a 3rd made the spirit even more alive or would since it is a beast master it would go along the route of tameing but idk all I know is there is great great potential... Another idea tho would be a trap like for example a trap that would spawn a certain amount of creatures to fight for you like a graveyard trap that could send out a certain amount of zombies/ skeletons or it could also be like the fishing pond where they can bury there dead or something but at a stupid high level he would be able to rise his dead like if his Chef officer died somehow or that he would be able to get him back in case something happens to him he can get a loophole or you can implement like those hero traps / towers in clash of clans that holds a powerful mob that can be used to attack or defend / you could also build a magic Academy to train some magiccc with his people to get a smi magic army also question is the rocket a one time use trap or can it be reused over and over.... Dang that was a rant lol well have a good day I look forward to what you do with this novel

ahaha there are definitely a lot of ideas about what to do with the Beast Master Trap but unfortunately, we can't really do much about the story as we merely translate it from Mandarin and it's further ahead at the moment. It's still ongoing though so I'm pretty sure that other crazy stuff might pop up!

Yeah there is a lot of ideas about the beast master trap and a lot of others 2 man I'm looking forward to this story yeah I'm tempted to read the raw English to read it I read it a bit the raw it's... Different like some of the names it was a little confuseing I see so so much potential in this novel it has shown a good balance from the start I say it could be very well one of the greats I read on here if the author keeps going on a path like this I also like it focus on the game also only a few glimpses of irl here and there yeah some of the ideas smi remind me of another book on here called the undead legion... Also well done on translateing usually it is hard for me at least to understand the names because there all very similar but I think you do a very good job so far keep up the good work yeah there is a few good novels that were so good but then suddenly a different translator and screws everything up like the names everything it's just bad so I hope you stick around with us good job once again

I read the raws and I have to say it's pretty disappointing. By chapter 500, mc is a straight bully alongside the villains are dumbed down in order to give mc time to grow (couldn't tell the mc enemy in c498 his city address). Ugh so stupid.

Yeah if its like that its a bit of a bummer maybe the author will change it past those chaps into where it's more of a challenge and entertaining but who knows

Yeah if its like that its a bit of a bummer maybe the author will change it past those chaps into where it's more of a challenge and entertaining but who knows

Thank you for the hard work. I really like this novel. Will you continue working on it if it is not chosen?

can you know more novel with same concept (tower defense)

Unfortunately, it's through webnovel's own criteria that decides whether we continue a title or not. I'm not too sure when the voting period is but probably after the full completion of the previous batch?

i agree this book is good hope its updated soon