Review Detail of DWArden45 in Ring Of Chaos

novel is confusing as the perspective moves all over the place with no indication of what's actually happening.mc goes missing for long stretches of time yet there's little care on the mc side togo home. apparently the author loves to be gritty and have the mc suffer encounters constantly. Tries to also be edgey by saying mc is a killer and so much other nonsense. Stick to one topic and expand on it instead of making it an outline of what's happening. Reactions of the environment and ramifications of what the mc is doing. As it is now, novel is terrible and needs a good editor to shape the ideas into a coherent story.