Review Detail of xFKratos in Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

Sounded interesting but dropping it after 40chapters. To me it seems like its written for amall kids (except 18+scenes) like everything is shiny, the most beautiful, feels the best and so on. Story isnt coherent or logically. One second he sits at his wedding celebration and the next moment we are on the other side of the planet doing something entirely different. Power and abilities dont really fit very well imo. And we are regularly reminded that we are reading and nnot experiencing a sstory by sentences as "our protagonist did this and that..."