Review Detail of Daoist_Rahul in Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

After Reading The Story here is my review first of all The MC morale character is worst he's in engagement ceremony thinking about his Wife's Mother's body and other stuff and he's first time was a prostitute He's stupid I would say And Some suggestions for author you can't write a good book with that short chapter like many people dropped because the chapter is 600 words or so and all of it was arrogant young master POV specially premium chapters it costs 3 coins like no free reader will use fast pass even if they use it it will not leave us a good feeling I suggest increase the word count or decrease the Release rate and Make a decent chapter with more words Iam Still Gonna Give this story 5 because I liked it