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Darkcrow8:We I can agree with you on Character development and Rushed chapter buy I have to Disagree with the other things you mentioned. 1: Well Voldemort is an arrogant little ****,Why would he care about some book which he wrote in his 4th or 5th year 2 And as for the Andromeda's deal with the MC ,well they are 11 year olds what do you expect from them. No Matter how Mature they act ,But they still lack experience in life and it's not like she will give him some really precious book from the Black library.

amaturewriter:again...I said it was riddle, not voldy, this is the guy that fooled dumbles by hiding a basilisk, obviously he'll hide a book..plus as said before, it would've gotten found. also look you stupid or what? the blacks library,.....kid or not ando s not an idiot, she has no reason to get the book MC has or even trade a family book,,,,,a favour sure, this I'll accept BUT a book, nah man,,this just shows the author didnt research his ****..cannon states blacks libary was precious and secret, no way would an ***** allow a kid to even take it without their permission, cause I mean its obvious..plus as I said before, ando is not an idiot listen dont argue by saying false ****.........

Darkcrow8:1. Why would he hide a book which has zero value in his eye, 2. You are saying as if Every book in the Black library is a rare treasure ,it does have some valuable book ,that doesn't mean that they can cause an uproar in the wizarding world. And what are you talking about research ,i mean there is no mention of black library in the canon universe.

amaturewriter:dude, why did malfoy want the black so much?.....other than the money?...................................also why do you gloss over the fact that the book would've easily been found by elves and reported [this would;ve happened long ago]..............also again, there is no reason for her to give a book from black library..its just made for plot and its stupid, dosnt make sense, should've just given MC a favor instead of the book,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,also just found that you are the author, look you just arguing with senseless **** and I am arguing back with facts [somewhat...]....I explained why I gave a ****ty rating, it wasnt a bash....I wont lie, idea was dope despite it not being an SI, but soo many plot holes and mistakes, I even pointed out some....you dont want to except it fine,,,,,I just tried to help?, IDK..i just pointed out the wrong..GL,,,I am out

amaturewriter:dude, why did malfoy want the black so much?.....other than the money?...................................also why do you gloss over the fact that the book would've easily been found by elves and reported [this would;ve happened long ago]..............also again, there is no reason for her to give a book from black library..its just made for plot and its stupid, dosnt make sense, should've just given MC a favor instead of the book,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,also just found that you are the author, look you just arguing with senseless **** and I am arguing back with facts [somewhat...]....I explained why I gave a ****ty rating, it wasnt a bash....I wont lie, idea was dope despite it not being an SI, but soo many plot holes and mistakes, I even pointed out some....you dont want to except it fine,,,,,I just tried to help?, IDK..i just pointed out the wrong..GL,,,I am out

Darkcrow8:I haven't mention anything about the books being easily available ,I am just stating that she could have given a book which is of equal value to that of the riddle's book.

amaturewriter:riddles book is like HBP book...incredibly valuable...why would MC give it away,,,,and how would she even know what MC was reading to be interested in it,,,,cause it looked just like a ordinary book, right? or are you now going to say it was labeled as a special book and ****???

Darkcrow8:Firstly the Riddle's book was filled with dark stuff therefore if a professor found out about the book ,It will be seized immediately,and There will be low chances of Andromeda telling it's existence to the professors if he let her borrow that book for a while. Secondly why would he keep that book like some priced trophy, It has zero value to it after memorizing the contents in it, therefore if he can get some benefits out of if after letting someone borrow that book then, Why not

amaturewriter:oh,,,,so the MC is a genius that can easily memorize a book filled with complicated knowledge of 7 years, damn,,,,MC must be a genius to understand **** he didnt even learn about,, I mean he must've obviously studied all the required knowledge during his years in the orphanage right??....right??...dude...stop saying senseless ****.. Also I asked,,,, how would Andromeda know that the book was valuable cause it looked normal Also why you ignoring the fact that it would;ve easily been founf by elfs and reported

amaturewriter:oh,,,,so the MC is a genius that can easily memorize a book filled with complicated knowledge of 7 years, damn,,,,MC must be a genius to understand **** he didnt even learn about,, I mean he must've obviously studied all the required knowledge during his years in the orphanage right??....right??...dude...stop saying senseless ****.. Also I asked,,,, how would Andromeda know that the book was valuable cause it looked normal Also why you ignoring the fact that it would;ve easily been founf by elfs and reported

Darkcrow8:Well it's not about MC being a genius ,as i have mentioned in the chapter that he has finished reading the magical theory ,so he was willing to give her that magical theory part of the book.

amaturewriter:dude, this phrase is just senseless, and add it with the previous previous comment...and all i see is a dude that just contradicts himself........I dont really know what your goal is but I am out,,,so much stupidity, damn I am out....

Darkcrow8:Sign....Something is wrong with you man ,I have seen your comments to others People's work and I can confidently say that you write those comments just to make you feel better about yourself ,You seems to leaving in your own fantasy world where your opinion matters but let me tell you something your opinion is not worth a **** in other people's eyes .No one care if you don't read their novels.

amaturewriter:again, i dont care what you think,,,I said what I thought about your book, and it was accurate, no made up ****,,,,all of it was the garbage you wrote,,,,I never force my opinions,,,only time I re-view is what I like or what is absolute garbage, some people agree, some people dont,,,I dont care....i mean if you've seen my comments you must've seen how I criticize rigth? , plus you must've seen the likes write, people most of the time agree...of course, some times I give a ****ty review BUT I explain why its so ****. ....my suggestions are almost always the same cause I just suggest what I like to writer, they take em and accept it, ignore it or there are the very few *****ed like you that just talk senseless **** and argue, and I cant help but argue back cause I mean each thing you say becomes more stupid and in cases like yours, contradicts yourself and then ends up talking ****..its fun to see retards like you who think criticism is an insult.. .I mean I didnt bash you, I pointed out ur flaws, very obvious ones with plot holes, and the fact that I explained it so clearly and took time to argue with you...and did it cause you actually had something I liked..i even said it in the review, I would've liked you to improve it but now, damn what piece of **** you...just sad that I wasted time arguing with you

Darkcrow8:Back to being a kid ,are we. I mean your review doesn't makes any sense (dosen't matters to anyone),I admitted that the fanfic was rushed ,But you said something about plot holes ,well they are pointless (there were no major plotholes to begin with),you were just trying to find defects that weren't even there .and that's just sad you know, you trying to gain attention by posting negative comments to just about anything.

amaturewriter:writer has made mistakes; 1- Starwars was written in 1976 and made into movie in 1977......it didnt exist in 1966..writer used comparison in chp 2 and its wrong....[yes this is nit picking..but proper mistakes are below] 2- Voldy...a smart ****, a selfish ****...do you think such a person would forget a book? especially one of his own notes?...illogical and wrong, plus this was tom, before he became voldy, more calculative and less nutty, so no would he leave his things...plus, wouldn't rooms get cleaned regularly, or atleast before and after someone lives in it?...it would've been long discovered. 3- This is probably the stupidest mistake....ando black trades a library book for a book from the black library with MC who she just met....I wont explain how stupid this is, cause I mean, any one with common sense or basic HP knowledge should understand why this is stupid right? 4- Moody and ando both went before or after MC, 5-Chps are short and CD is bare minimum, its bland ..' . 2--you messed up voldmort intelligence,,,,you messed on andos intelligence and the CD is bland and barely present...you even said it....sigh..honestly what are you? a kid?....what a *****.....say what you want...just dont say I am forcing down ideas, cause thats wrong,,,I didnt even suggest in your book, cause it was bad