Review Detail of White_Falcon21 in Yang Nation

Wow, it's zero comeback oofff!!! About Yang Nation, an Eastern Fantasy...(?), why Eastern Empire has a vampire oh Jiang Shi? Just kidding! Writing Quality Good..oh yeah...about Vivian went to Yang Empire? Your writing skill is good! Grammar is good! I can read it and understand it well! Stability of Updates It such a waste for good story is slow to update, Oh may...you are quite, *ehem* (note: this is not rude or something bad word)...anyway, it's good to make a hanging ending, so the readers will "seek more". Story Development I like it, but I think the phase is too fast? You need to explain Vivian in more specific detail as well as the Empire. Character Design Hmm...I can't say much because I still don't grasp Vivian's true characters. World Background I can say the world concept is interesting. I just need to wait for more chapters then.