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A story with fascinating story arc and great character development. I love how the writer put enough details in the story, it makes the story tangible and real. It wasn’t too much and it wasn’t lacking. The story was a compelling read that I didn’t notice that I was reading almost to chapter 10. It was a great quick read for me. The characters were intriguing, each has their own personalities but it took me a while to connect with them nevertheless, I love the male and female lead. I kinda felt like I was reading a webtoon or something and I don’t mind it all! I love how the characters conversed well with each other. It felt normal and real. Story development works seamlessly and I don’t have any complaints about it. I like how the writer took time to develop the story and how the character’s grow. I suggest adding POV headers in the chapters. Since I got a bit confuse with the pov in some chapters. World building was decent, I could imagine the settings very well which I didn’t expect it to be that good to be honest, but hey, the writer subverted my expectations. Overall, I enjoyed this quick read and I don’t have much to say but keep writing!

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Mrs. Zhang! Hello

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Noted. Thank you