Review Detail of Lordofall2000 in My Vampire System

Maybe I'm just to old to read stories portraying high schoolers. The characters seems to be terribly dumb and without any common sense, I could only read about 17-18 chapters before risking to attack my walls with the phone I have read this atrocious story on. I could say a lot about the fact that there's absolutely 0 world building and if there's any character development, it's forced and embarrassing, without any explanation at all, especially the stalker girl who apparently has nothing else to do than just stalk the main character, even after she was introduced as a hardworking person that trains a lot to improve herself, she wastes time following the mc to see who's he picking fights with and why he's hiding his powers. All in all, the thinking power of all the characters put together is saying a lot about the author himself. I will stop here with my review as it's not worth it to write about all the things I found lacking, I already wasted too much time on this.