Review Detail of Penality in My Vampire System

Item: My Vampire System
Rating: 3

Review detail

PenalityLv21yrPenality

I expected more from this. First thing that made me want to drop the book was the writing style, it is just terrible. Average at best. No depth, characters feel vague they don't even feel real. At times it's like the author is projecting his thoughts through the MC. Then there's the issue with how terrible at making decisions the MC is. Someone called him brain dead and yes i agree. Only thing that has me hooked is the diversity in abilities and power in all the worlds.

My Vampire System

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Sanatosei_NethoLv2Sanatosei_Netho

Hello you would not regret reading this work, its so good one of the best main character if not the best development, it just a few chapters and the world building and development is good, the first season is finally finished if you want a great story try this Fragile Phantasy

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Rubens_AlvesLv3Rubens_Alves

and still keep reading... Stop talking nonsense and spreading hate for your lack of ability to read correctly.

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SrCuervoLv4SrCuervo

Hello! I am pleased to recommend my novel "Beyond the Supernatural" to you, a work that will take you through a supernatural world full of mysteries and exciting adventures. Thank you for your time and consideration!

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