Review Detail of Sir_Otaku_1 in My Vampire System

Item: My Vampire System
Rating: 4

Review detail

Sir_Otaku_1Lv132yrSir_Otaku_1

I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)

My Vampire System

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Replies72

Sharleen_SharlyLv1Sharleen_Sharly

I absolutely love it. It always leave me wondering what happens in the next chapter. It's ok to say I'm glued.💓💓💓

2yr

Lv1

umm well I'm addicted

2yr

Layton_Disley_6275Lv1Layton_Disley_6275

I think the sound bring out a manga version

2yr

eunjiapinkLv11eunjiapink

I like the concept and the story line but I hate the MC...he is very very stupid and don't know how to utilize his power, always hope others to solve the problem

2yr

DragonMastaLv13DragonMasta

Lack of what? What is wrong with you? Out of all the things I've heard... Lord.

2yr

Sir_Otaku_1Lv13Sir_Otaku_1

Lack of punctuation and proper grammar? You know, the stuff that's vital to books?? Nothing is wrong with me, I'm just used to reading books and webnovels with better editors. Perhaps something is wrong with you for thinking nothing is wrong with the way things are in this webnovel.

DragonMasta:Lack of what? What is wrong with you? Out of all the things I've heard... Lord.

2yr

Miki_eptLv12Miki_ept

I think there will be never any kind if romance, am I right?

2yr

GarwardLv14Garward

Eh i think Its people being used to rough translations I completely agree if I have to go back and figure out what the author was *trying* to say constantly it certainly breaks the imersion luckily this story doesnt do it often enough to ruin it like a lot of novels on here do

Sir_Otaku_1:Lack of punctuation and proper grammar? You know, the stuff that's vital to books?? Nothing is wrong with me, I'm just used to reading books and webnovels with better editors. Perhaps something is wrong with you for thinking nothing is wrong with the way things are in this webnovel.

2yr

WillowWhiteLv10WillowWhite

I am with you. There are both spelling and grammatical errors in every chapter. Like you said, it is still a great novel, though! I would like to see it go from great to stellar with spelling error updates.

2yr

nicolas_grantLv1nicolas_grant

😇😇😇😇😇😇🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍

2yr

Willie_PrioleauLv4Willie_Prioleau

I haven't gotten through the whole book yet but he doesn't always rely on others and he makes teenager decisions.

eunjiapink:I like the concept and the story line but I hate the MC...he is very very stupid and don't know how to utilize his power, always hope others to solve the problem

2yr