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Review Detail of Azirus in My Vampire System

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Azirus
AzirusLv33yrAzirus

I totally forgot to rate this last time I read it. it was just that bad. the author perpetually stagnates and reverts character development. the grammar isn't terrible, but grammarly and word both exist so anything less than like 98% correct is very bad. the world background building was ok not the greatest the occasional exposition gets kinda irritating after a bit. also short chaps to keep that top spot.

My Vampire System

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Azirus
AzirusLv3Azirus

so looking at the current reviews for this it reminds me I totally told off the author in a chap comments section... did he actually take that seriously? or is this still the same vapid fan group that thinks edgy means mature and thoughtful

Laid_O
Laid_OLv14Laid_O

Dude this is webnoval edegy does mean mature and thoughtful here. also what are the first to words of the title *My Vampire. if you dont think that would mean it would contain any edegy moments....

Azirus:so looking at the current reviews for this it reminds me I totally told off the author in a chap comments section... did he actually take that seriously? or is this still the same vapid fan group that thinks edgy means mature and thoughtful