Review Detail of Henryk_2099 in My Vampire System
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The writing is so bad. You can notice grammatical errors every chapter and it disrupts your flow of reading. The writing style is pretty bland as well. The plot is good and this novel could have been better if the writing, world-building and character personalities were executed well. I hope those areas could be fixed. I can also feel the excitement of the author in writing some scenes, but they are too rushed. It's like uncooked rice because you added too little water. If you disagree, I urge you to read an ACTUAL book. This is wattpad quality for me.
My Vampire System
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Lmao, too sad. If the author can't take criticisms, he/she/they can't grow. The author will be stuck on writing mediocre novels.
Dark_warrior:lol this novel is first because author deletes bad reviews 95% and majority of positive review are all fake this story is trash super idiot mc too many forced thing its feels childish and more other bad things about this novel and author will probably delete my comment or your review
you can ignore the person above you can see that there are plenty of reviews left up that are one star 3 star all on the first page. the rating isn't even the highest on the site and has nothing to do with why it's rated number one. I agree with you with the writing quality and the wattpadd comment didn't hurt because to me thats what novels are. most traditnally written novels don't do well on this site actually you have to write to suit the style. I would say 80 percent of readers on this app don't read traditnal books if i was writing for Amazon the writing and everything would be completely different. thanks for your feedback and I agree with you 100 percent
Henryk_2099:Lmao, too sad. If the author can't take criticisms, he/she/they can't grow. The author will be stuck on writing mediocre novels.