Review Detail of Tina_Modert in My Vampire System

Overall a really fun story! All of the characters have their own complex back story that adds to the plot in their own ways. It is also a new take on many common and overwhelmed themes, mixing them together so they are almost unrecognizable. The only problem is that it needs to have an editor go through it, as there are multiple places where the wrong name is written, or grammar is bad, but it is rarely enough to take away from the story