Review Detail of Cloud999 in My Vampire System
Review detail
In my opinion, this novel isn’t #1 rank material, but the author is a genius for bribing ppl with extra chapters for power stones. Writing quality is not the worse but still pretty bad, lots of misspelling and wrong words used. Once example, ‘integration’ is frequently used instead of ‘interrogation’. Although this happens quite a lot, the real problem is the way the story is written. The writing style is too shallow, it doesn’t give you the sense that you are immersed in the story world. There are not enough details to describe the character and environment. Up to now I still can’t picture what the characters and the school look like. One reviewer compared this with Lord of the Mysteries, which is just absurd. The writing style of LoM makes you feel like you are inside the MC’s head, immersed in his thoughts, emotions, and actions. This novel feels like you’re reading a summary of the MC’s daily activities, it is detached and doesn’t bring you up close and personal. Story development is progressing nicely so far. Contains your typical tropes and plot armor, but it’s not as absurdly done as other webnovels. Not much else to say since the novel is just beginning. Character design: It’s too early to tell but so far just 2 characters have hints of hidden depth, which could lead somewhere interesting. For now, the characters seem very shallow. The characters need to be fleshed out more, especially regarding their physical descriptions. Vague descriptions like ‘short brown hair and tall figure’ and ‘long blonde hair and perfect proportions’ doesn’t cut it. World background has great potential. Not much is revealed yet, but there are portals to other worlds and different species and factions, which leaves much to be discovered. Overall, I like the novel. There are only 108 chapters released so far, so there is room for improvement. I look forward to seeing how this novel progresses, it definitely has great potential.
My Vampire System
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JKSManga:I just wanted to say this is a well written review and how reviews should be done. and I actulley agree with every point you made, about the introductions of characters and not describing the world around them enough. will try my best to improve
so your first line in the review made me butthurt cause.... in webnovel there are lots and lots of original novels who post on their description of there books that if there ranking increased/decreased from this to this they will post bonus chapters.... and this is a common thing..... and u are saying its a bribe..... author just wants the people to set their priority while reading....
kishorebhathane:so your first line in the review made me butthurt cause.... in webnovel there are lots and lots of original novels who post on their description of there books that if there ranking increased/decreased from this to this they will post bonus chapters.... and this is a common thing..... and u are saying its a bribe..... author just wants the people to set their priority while reading....
just because alot of people like NTR does not make it right. (don't mind me, just want to join in a month old comment)
kishorebhathane:so your first line in the review made me butthurt cause.... in webnovel there are lots and lots of original novels who post on their description of there books that if there ranking increased/decreased from this to this they will post bonus chapters.... and this is a common thing..... and u are saying its a bribe..... author just wants the people to set their priority while reading....
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The fact that the author liked this trash critical review makes me suspect the ratings even more given how he can delete reviews he doesn't like. The review literally has no material criticism. No one cares about grammar and no one cares if you don't think it's the best novel in the world... Honestly, I think the author is boosting this review because he knows people like me search for the negative reviews and if all I find is trash like this, then it's not going to discourage me from reading..
DarkD:The fact that the author liked this trash critical review makes me suspect the ratings even more given how he can delete reviews he doesn't like. The review literally has no material criticism. No one cares about grammar and no one cares if you don't think it's the best novel in the world... Honestly, I think the author is boosting this review because he knows people like me search for the negative reviews and if all I find is trash like this, then it's not going to discourage me from reading..
DarkD:The fact that the author liked this trash critical review makes me suspect the ratings even more given how he can delete reviews he doesn't like. The review literally has no material criticism. No one cares about grammar and no one cares if you don't think it's the best novel in the world... Honestly, I think the author is boosting this review because he knows people like me search for the negative reviews and if all I find is trash like this, then it's not going to discourage me from reading..
My house of horrors? Omniscient Reader? Along with LOTM these three are very popular. Also MHOH gives a similar vibe to LOTM, its not scary(for me at least) but very immersive with interesting characters. Also omniscient reader is an amazing plot heavy story with many plot twists and an amazing world. (it has a manhwa now with 31 chapters) Reverend Insanity also very very popular(understatement). Probably your gateway to webnovels. Has a manhua but I wouldn't recommend it. Then again with how well known these three are, you probably already read them.
DisiroRevSanity:I like how you wrote the review which is kinda thorough. Can you recommend me something good like Lord of the Mysteries or Reverend Insanity? Thank you:)
DisiroRevSanity:I like how you wrote the review which is kinda thorough. Can you recommend me something good like Lord of the Mysteries or Reverend Insanity? Thank you:)
