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Well written story, with a pretty deverse group of characters that feel fleshed out and will have actual character growth, pretty fun system and power set up. The only problems i had were its similarity to unOrdinary the webtoon, basically the structure of the military is just a huge bully environment, really takes the realism out of the whole, 'world needs everyone to unite' vibe. Its not that the characters are making dumb decisions or stupid, they just lack credibility when the world around them seems like its primary school.
My Vampire System
JKSManga
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hey thanks for the review I'll just say what I said to someone else. if the situation like this happens no one knows how the world would react. when the Corona virus came no one thought everyone would be so selfish and horde toilet paper of all things. lol. I understand it may seem unrealistic that they should be uniting and not acting like this but sadly the world might actulley turn out like this. but I think you have a good review that sets up the expectation of future readers. hope you continue to enjoy the story
Woah really? you are comparing ppl hoarding toilet papers to the "government" in your novel making schools/military places where torturing anyone weaker is allowed? And they think that all these tortured/bullied people would turn out as "I was weak back then, i will obtain more power and protect HUMANITY" or smth like that? Hell no, if they ever get stronger they would start by skinning everyone responsible for their suffering. It's completely illogical and dumb (besides that i liked the novel). Thou it never was mentioned about how girls are treated, considering they can do whatever they want i'm guessing all the girls are getting raped in corners where NOT TOO MANY people will see.
JKSManga:hey thanks for the review I'll just say what I said to someone else. if the situation like this happens no one knows how the world would react. when the Corona virus came no one thought everyone would be so selfish and horde toilet paper of all things. lol. I understand it may seem unrealistic that they should be uniting and not acting like this but sadly the world might actulley turn out like this. but I think you have a good review that sets up the expectation of future readers. hope you continue to enjoy the story
What I'm saying is you never know what would happen if this did happen. And every country is different you only have to look at the situation in North Korea to see that their lives are different. Even India have a cast system. So what I'm saying is when things happen you can;t just say that would never happen. Im sure if you went in the past and said hey if a virus was to happen everyone would start holding toilet paper people would say that would never happen. And with the girls this happens in today's society, you only have to go to third world countries to see that the rich and powerful buy people all the time. There isn't even the need to rape
BrabbitX:Woah really? you are comparing ppl hoarding toilet papers to the "government" in your novel making schools/military places where torturing anyone weaker is allowed? And they think that all these tortured/bullied people would turn out as "I was weak back then, i will obtain more power and protect HUMANITY" or smth like that? Hell no, if they ever get stronger they would start by skinning everyone responsible for their suffering. It's completely illogical and dumb (besides that i liked the novel). Thou it never was mentioned about how girls are treated, considering they can do whatever they want i'm guessing all the girls are getting raped in corners where NOT TOO MANY people will see.
well... you are right. If normal people couldn't become stronger and stronger like they can in your novel. ******** happen for a reason, only reason they don't escalate or happen at all in some third world countries is cuz they don't have enough power to even protest/rebel. I just can't believe that a government would be so stupid. also school shootings happen for a reason and bullying is forbidden for a reason. This i can't get behind so i can't enjoy the novel.
JKSManga:What I'm saying is you never know what would happen if this did happen. And every country is different you only have to look at the situation in North Korea to see that their lives are different. Even India have a cast system. So what I'm saying is when things happen you can;t just say that would never happen. Im sure if you went in the past and said hey if a virus was to happen everyone would start holding toilet paper people would say that would never happen. And with the girls this happens in today's society, you only have to go to third world countries to see that the rich and powerful buy people all the time. There isn't even the need to rape
I dont know how far you have gotten in the novel but it's the same here, they can't raise power without the military and at any point they can take their power away due to another one with an ability. so if anyone does rebel then there powers are taken away. also not a single school shooting has ever happend in my country. America just has it's own problems as does every country and as does the people running this current world in the novel. but I understand where you are coming from just explaining things.
BrabbitX:well... you are right. If normal people couldn't become stronger and stronger like they can in your novel. ******** happen for a reason, only reason they don't escalate or happen at all in some third world countries is cuz they don't have enough power to even protest/rebel. I just can't believe that a government would be so stupid. also school shootings happen for a reason and bullying is forbidden for a reason. This i can't get behind so i can't enjoy the novel.
You actually have good points, but i guess its just not my cup of tea. feels like stupid ppl owning the government in your novel, which is also probably true, i guess i just dont like that setting too much. also i'm guessing it's illegal to own guns. guns = power even if it can be controlled.
JKSManga:I dont know how far you have gotten in the novel but it's the same here, they can't raise power without the military and at any point they can take their power away due to another one with an ability. so if anyone does rebel then there powers are taken away. also not a single school shooting has ever happend in my country. America just has it's own problems as does every country and as does the people running this current world in the novel. but I understand where you are coming from just explaining things.
