man author, even with the obvious flaws and mix emotions moments continuesly to show on early to mid chapters i still enjoy it. but the sudden change of mind of tang and you making him soft realy break his real character. i think you want this as his character development but man I didn't suit him at all. I didn't even suit the atmosphere of this novel. he should be domineering and ruthless to his enemy not the otherway around. such a disappointment. imight drop this soon it was a great ride man but the early thousands chap development 'its a mehhh for me.
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