Review Detail of _VA_ in Searching for Andromeda

This a superb story, in terms of both writing quality and plot, one of the best originals I've seen. The plot development pace is quite steady, and the character designs are really, really good (at least for me they are). The quality is also excellent, I've spotted no errors at all, and the transitions from one scene to another is very smooth. The vocabulary and descriptive language are very comfortable to the eyes and mind, without excessive details but not lacking in any either.