Review Detail of ranmaro in Agatha The Legendary Guild Master
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Welcome to my new novel This is the usual shameless review from the author This novel started as a side story of my main, then i paused it for a while before returning to edit and write on it for nearly a week now. It’s pure litrpg style, with main focus over guilds and game elements. It also has romance as a love triangle deep struggle plus main huge plot i hope to write it down well. I will try to update 3 to 5 chapters daily here. I hope you like it.
Agatha The Legendary Guild Master
ranmaro
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Well things wn’t be that simple As both of men will try to show their love and devotion to her while she will swindle between the love of both without knowing how to choose or who to believe.
Nikhil_Chand:How can it be a love triangle when agatha wants to escape being in the harem of crown prince? More like Shin and agatha will come closer and crown prince doesn't wanna lose agatha to his enemy
Ok coz from synopsis it didn't look like she wanna marry crown prince. You might have to change the synopsis in that case
ranmaro:Well things wn’t be that simple As both of men will try to show their love and devotion to her while she will swindle between the love of both without knowing how to choose or who to believe.
Yea, based on the synopsis the crown prince is a sex freak with a harem that she specifically joined the VR training program to avoid marrying him where she meets Shin who is nothing but helpful to her. Seems like she’d automatically pick Shin considering she didn’t want to marry the prince in the first place and have to be a random member of his harem. I personally hate love triangles, so would’ve preferred it be about her experiences in the game and then her developing her relationship with one guy. When love triangles end up in stories it seems like the MC usually acts like an indecisive idiot that either tries to play both sides or just never makes a decision. Anyway best of luck with your story.
Hi About the novel, it's mainly focused on the MC journey in the game, as for the love issue, she sometimes likes Shin and other times likes Respon, but she won't stick to any of them for long period. let's describe it as 'complicated relationship'.
J_S_2998:Yea, based on the synopsis the crown prince is a sex freak with a harem that she specifically joined the VR training program to avoid marrying him where she meets Shin who is nothing but helpful to her. Seems like she’d automatically pick Shin considering she didn’t want to marry the prince in the first place and have to be a random member of his harem. I personally hate love triangles, so would’ve preferred it be about her experiences in the game and then her developing her relationship with one guy. When love triangles end up in stories it seems like the MC usually acts like an indecisive idiot that either tries to play both sides or just never makes a decision. Anyway best of luck with your story.
ranmaro:Hi About the novel, it's mainly focused on the MC journey in the game, as for the love issue, she sometimes likes Shin and other times likes Respon, but she won't stick to any of them for long period. let's describe it as 'complicated relationship'.
The story is about mc journey to establsih a guild as having a guild is only limited to nobles and she is considered hersefl a commoner so she will get many troubles dealing with these nobles untill she establishes her guild
BreezyNovels:Will this novel have Guild Building and Kingdom Building in-game?