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Pyxoris
PyxorisLv143yrPyxoris

I can’t read this, the grammar makes it feel like a kid wrote the story. How hard can it be to capitalize letters? Unnecessary exclamation marks etc

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Pyxoris
PyxorisLv14Pyxoris

Great idea though, just poorly written grammar-wise.